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  1. Put your luggage on the conveyor belt.
  2. Place your electronic devices into the bin provided. 
  3. This is over 100 milliliters.
  4. I’m sorry you can’t bring it with you.
  5. Walk through the metal detector.
  6. Please step aside for a pat down.
  7. Step back.
  8. Place your baggage over here.
  9. It is prohibited/forbidden/unallowed on the plane.
  10. No Photography.
  11. Your liquid are beyond the maximum exceeds the maximum amount allowed.
  12. Do you want to finish it or pour it out?
  13. Please make sure your checked baggage passes through the X-ray inspection.
  14. It is containing contains a lithium battery/lead-acid battery.
  15. They must be carried in carry-on baggage only.
  16. The battery exceeding exceeds 100 Watt-hours.
  17. You need to get airline’s approval.
  18. You have to go to the check-in counter where you can drop off your baggage and get your boarding pass.
  19. We need your signature for your permission to abandon your hazardous item. (中翻英)簽名的原因是表示你自願放棄這項危險物品. (旅客問為什麼要簽名, 我跟他解釋)

 

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Jane學員的英文寫作 (中等/intermediate) -- Ann老師批改(下方紅字)

2012/12/14 15:52
 

Bob worked as a manager in the furniture store. He made some advertising campaign for sales. But the business was still going down. The competition called Honest Ade’s furniture store cost an arm and a leg, that means everything there charged top dollar, but everyone still shopped there.

Peter is Bob’s boss. He broke the news to bob and told him his store was about to go belly-up. Peter’s new advertising campaign was a real flop. He decided to give Bob an ax. Bob tried to talk it over and explained he thought the campaign could work and saved a day and the competition gave him creeps. He felt they were very strange. He asked Peter to give him a chance to go back to the drawing board.

In the end of their conversation, Peter told Bob clearly that there was no point in arguing it and a new manager coming and she would be as sharp as tack and it has been decided to get Bob canned. Bob hoped Peter could consider that after all, Bob has been worked for ages. Finally, Bob knew Peter has made up his mind, so criticized that was a dead-end job. Peter nearly lost temper and asked Bob to leave his office as soon as possible.

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Bob worked as a manager in the furniture store. He made some advertising campaign for sales. But the business was still going down. The competition called Honest Ade’s furniture store charged top dollar, that meant everything there cost an arm and a leg, but everyone still shopped there.

 

Peter is Bob’s boss. He broke the news to bob that his store was about to go belly-up. Peter’s new advertising campaign was a real flop. He decided to give Bob the ax. Bob tried to talk it over and explained he thought the campaign could work and saved the day and the competition gave him the creeps. He felt they were very strange. He asked Peter to give him a chance to go back to the drawing board.

 

In the end of their conversation, Peter told Bob clearly that there was no point in arguing about it and a new manager was coming to take over his job (to replace him) and she would be as sharp as tack , so Bod had to face the reality that he got canned (got fired). Bob hoped Peter could consider that he has been worked in the company for ages after all. Finally, Bob knew Peter has made up his mind, so criticized that was a dead-end job. Peter nearly lost temper and asked Bob to leave his office as soon as possible.

 

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Jessica批改學員英文日記(中級程度)

2008/10/10 22:50
 

 

修改註解版(紅字):

 

Dear Jessica:

 

This is first time that I send mail to you.(that 可以省略)
Maybe I can write somethings(something) about(the reason) why I am eager to learn English.
And I am happy in(in
不需要,副詞前不需介詞) here to meet a good English teacher.
She has patiences(patience) to correct my English , especially in the(the
不需要) listening.

It will bring me many promotion opportunities if I have good English skills.
And I already have some other strengths,like RD background, factory working experiences...etc.
The road to the management level of company is very far(the possibility to work in the management position is low) if I have no this kind of abilities.(ability)

So I have to keep the passion in learning English and face my weakness.
I think one day I can present very well in the(the
去掉) speech (in the speech也没必要)in English.

(I think i can present in English very well one day.)


Now it is time to bed.
to be continued

BR
CN

 

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Dear Jessica


This is first time
(that) I send mail to you.
Maybe I can write somethings(something) about(the reason) why I am eager to learn English.
And I am happy here to meet a good English teacher.
She has patience
to correct my English, especially in listening.

It will bring me many promotion opportunities if I have good English skills.
And I already have some other strengths,
like RD background, factory working experiences...etc.
The road to the management level of company is very far(the possibility to work in the management position is low) if I have no this kind of abilit
y.

So I have to keep the passion in learning English and face my weakness.
I think I can present in English
very well one day.


Now it is time to bed.
To be continued.

BR
CN

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