Jane學員的英文寫作 (中等/intermediate) -- Ann老師批改(下方紅字)

2012/12/14 15:52
 

Bob worked as a manager in the furniture store. He made some advertising campaign for sales. But the business was still going down. The competition called Honest Ade’s furniture store cost an arm and a leg, that means everything there charged top dollar, but everyone still shopped there.

Peter is Bob’s boss. He broke the news to bob and told him his store was about to go belly-up. Peter’s new advertising campaign was a real flop. He decided to give Bob an ax. Bob tried to talk it over and explained he thought the campaign could work and saved a day and the competition gave him creeps. He felt they were very strange. He asked Peter to give him a chance to go back to the drawing board.

In the end of their conversation, Peter told Bob clearly that there was no point in arguing it and a new manager coming and she would be as sharp as tack and it has been decided to get Bob canned. Bob hoped Peter could consider that after all, Bob has been worked for ages. Finally, Bob knew Peter has made up his mind, so criticized that was a dead-end job. Peter nearly lost temper and asked Bob to leave his office as soon as possible.

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Bob worked as a manager in the furniture store. He made some advertising campaign for sales. But the business was still going down. The competition called Honest Ade’s furniture store charged top dollar, that meant everything there cost an arm and a leg, but everyone still shopped there.

 

Peter is Bob’s boss. He broke the news to bob that his store was about to go belly-up. Peter’s new advertising campaign was a real flop. He decided to give Bob the ax. Bob tried to talk it over and explained he thought the campaign could work and saved the day and the competition gave him the creeps. He felt they were very strange. He asked Peter to give him a chance to go back to the drawing board.

 

In the end of their conversation, Peter told Bob clearly that there was no point in arguing about it and a new manager was coming to take over his job (to replace him) and she would be as sharp as tack , so Bod had to face the reality that he got canned (got fired). Bob hoped Peter could consider that he has been worked in the company for ages after all. Finally, Bob knew Peter has made up his mind, so criticized that was a dead-end job. Peter nearly lost temper and asked Bob to leave his office as soon as possible.

 

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